Thursday, 01 January 2009
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Chapter 10 Fear
The creature, for the first time, actually stopped in front of somebody instead of just passing them by like it usually does. It had no choice but to stop as a girl with yellow hair, black eyes, blue armor and a blue skirt stood in its way; it didn't know who she was obviously or why she was in its way, but the creature sensed a strong power level, which got it to pay attention to her. But amidst the chaos in Norcelus, they looked at each other for 5 full minutes until somebody finally said something,
"You're....you're Fear, aren't you?" The girl said. The creature had a look that it thought it meant,
"Uh...are you crazy?" But instead it was interpreted in a different way,
"So you are Fear! No one else could cause this type of pure madness!!!" She said, and from that point on, the creature didn't really care what she thought of it. She said something else, "Hey, stop playing games and respond to me!" It responded with a look that translated pretty easily,
"You're not in my league, " and scowled at her with its black-red eyes. She couldn't react at this at all because she had a look that meant,
"I can't believe you just did that!!!" face. Then instead of doing any more face looks, the creature stopped playing games and decided to walk past her. "Where do you think you're going you ugly son of a bastard!!!!" Without much of a thought she charged the creature so quickly that it not only left a shocked look on its face, but it couldn't dodge her blow as it took a shot in the ribs and fell hard to the ground. "You think I'm insignificant?!!? You can't avoid me!!!" She then chanted a quick spell, then from the ground three small light spheres coalesced together, and once it was fully formed it violently went towards the creature. A huge explosion of light danced and flew around the area, and when the smoke cleared a crater was left in the ground, and while the creature dodged the grunt of it, it still bled profusely in its left arm. The young girl then charged it again, but unfortunately for her, she got the full attention of the creature, and while its facial expressions will rarely show it, it was pissed. The creature opened its eyes, shadow dashed her advance, grabbed the girl's head, then stuck its mutated claws into her head(or more specifically her brain) causing a wild scream from her, then planted her face first into the ground. Then the creature flew up in midair, chanted something small, and then transformed viciously into some dark and powerful phoenix. The phoenix then charged at the girl, engulfed her completely, squeezed some blood out of her, then a voice out of nowhere yelled,
" Careless Phoe-" But before it could finish its sentence, a light ended up blasting the phoenix to some far away place.
.....It woke up. It was lying on the ground in a cold, cold place where lots of snow fell. The creature looked at its bloody claws, stared at it for a while, then looked at the cloudless sky...it then pulled out the Blue Orb of Bethumet, and realized it had what it wanted. Realizing that, it got up, and walked gingerly back to its mountain...
Chapter 10????????
energy.......energy.......energy.......energy......energy......energy....energy....energy.....energy.....energy....energy....energy.....energy
I NEED ENERGY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Um... I'm just sitting here and talking to people like usual *has the day off*
Oh my gosh... o.o Is she dead in the story?
...Yup. End of the third quarter =D
xD You never know, that's why I was like "Oh crap"
I know I have to wait. It's just not easy, though easier than with Blood Plus o.o
And I started in October of 2005.
The New Year's Eve party in '05 was awesome... People stuck in a blizzard in upstate NY in a car got on their laptops for it.
You're confusing things...
Well, the day was planned before, and the weather was fine... But a couple of my friends were stuck in a blizzard on the road in NY and they still made it. o.o;
That was my rp moment...
And no, I'm not in NY.
xD I know, I told them they really could have not showed up in that situation but they decided to anyway.
[lol love myself? xDD thats funny. lol. I just put facts up because maybe people wanted to know. haha.]
well thats the second chapter. I didnt post the first chapter because its just CarrieAnn talking about herself. what she looks like how amazing she is. she's really quite self centered. lol. i didnt post it because I figured people would get bored.
DONT YOU READ??? lol i said i didnt post the first chapter. and im prolly not going to i could send it to you if you want. but it wont go on my site. o btw i had soup... but i am still sick...
hey i ate the soup. and i get away with everything XD
Um... I have no clue. xD
Whoa!
Action!
Okay. lol
And yeah, I go back Monday.
I'm doing quite well. o.o
xD You didn't ask about that. My best is math. o.o I'm great at that.
You can't be as bad as some people I know. o.o
You can't be 18% bad. xDD
That was their semester grade. 18%.
xD You're TWICE as good as him!
._.; I was trying to make you look good.
Sounds good to me. ^^ Not sure what to talk about though.
Of course. It's great!