Saturday, 27 December 2008

  • Chapter 8 Fear

    The Norcelus Region was out of all the regions combined the dirtiest region ever as it housed 9 of the most feared bandit clans ever, and was known for being dishonest and cruel beyond a shadow of a doubt. Eight years ago, Amgis, a green haired thief, came out of nowhere and with the power of the Blue Orb of Bethumet, controlled the clans by his lonesome, forging a darker path for Norcelus as he rigged each and every town of its stock and created his own tall mansion with the labor of countless men and women. These acts of cruelty and shame might have continued, but a new age was born with Amgis holding that orb.....

     

    Because the creature wanted it to.

     

    "Nighttime watch duty. We're bandits, we shouldn't be night guards!!!" One of the three guards said.

     

    "I knowze what'cha mean, we're supposa be thieves, stealing and robbin' and shtick, not some suped upta lookouts!!!!" Yelled a second guard with some terrible English.

     

    "Well, what else is there to do?" said the third guard near a small fire. "Thanks to that spoiled brat, this is our way of earning money, especially since no one comes through here anyways.”

     

     "Yeahza, we earn's some money, ok," the second guard said, "no more than somze prick buying a cup of cold sup and a sitck!!!!"

     

    "Just to do what???" The first guard joined in, “Just to sit down near a fire for eight hours watching some freak show with black wings walk toward us like he's some tough guy!"

     

    "YEAH!" The second guard said until the third guard pointed out,

     

    "Wait, where'd ya get the black wings idea from?"

     

    "From that mutated lookin' fool walking towards- SON OF A-!??!?"They was pretty stunned to see someone actually walking towards this region considering its history, but yes, the creature with black wings slowly walked toward them desiring something that this region has. And because they were so stunned, the creature actually passed them by and was 4 ft ahead of them. They were pissed when this happened.

     

    “Hey you prick, what do ya think ya doing!??!" The first guard yelled.

     

    "You can't justa go pastin uss without seeina uss!!!" Said the second guard. Then the third guard while walking up towards the creature said,

     

    "Some tough guy you are, just entering our turf without a-" And without much effort the creature slashed almost all of its head off, leaving it hanging like its head was cracked, except the blood spouted out, and causing the two remaining to remain speechless until the creature didn't even enter their site. After they stopped wetting themselves because of terror, the second guard shook while saying,

     

    "S-s-shou--ldd-nn't -wweee-bee--ccall----inn---out----hel---ppp??" Without saying a word, the first guard sent a flare up to the sky: a threat was coming.

     

    At about halfway between the main entrance of Norcelus and most of the battlefield stood all nine clans, with the weapons of their choice, wondering what dunces would come to this region to challenge them. Even though Amgis didn't show up, they felt that there's no way that they would be outnumbered or beaten. After a while though they continued to wait, and an hour later, some were getting tired of waiting, and then they all believed that the guards pulled some sort of prank, which wouldn't make sense since Amgis outlawed jokes in this region, and a prank is similar to a joke, so some felt like they wouldn't be stupid enough to do that. But another hour passed, and all of the clans were furious and angry as they felt like they was tricked and was motioned to head back home. Some bandits were curious though, and checked to see over the hill if there was something coming.

     

    "GAAAHHH!!!" Well, I guess they found out.

     

    "LOOK! I see someone strange!" Yelled one of the bandits, except you would think the painful screams gave that away. They all looked, and there it was, the creature, still walking painfully slowly. Once the bandits saw this, they were outraged and charged at that creature like wild beasts angry that they didn't get their share of food from their masters. Um....they needed to be angrier? I don't think that mattered because the creature was too determined, and realistically too powerful, as the 450 bandits that were on the battlefield ready to avenge their comrades were instead sliced, diced, ripped, thrashed, etc, basically anything bad that could happen on this battlefield, such as someone's man region getting ripped and thrown on the battlefield, someone's heart being taken out and put into somebody's mouth, then somebody's eyes were taken out and crushed....yeah, it was a whole lot of shit in the battlefield....with only one survivor. That survivor was heading towards Norcelus...

     

    "Yawwnn....." was Amgis as he rose up from his bed and saw the blue orb glow like something bad is going on. He wondered what's going on. He put some clothes on and washed his face, then looked out to the sky to see daybreak. Then he looked down from his terrace and saw a trail of blood in a straight path, then went right towards the entrance. "HOLY SH-" He then tried to get someone nearby, except that wasn't the case, but then some odd thought came into his head, "Fear.....radiant...power...cold...." Then as soon as he came to his senses, a figure wearing a black trench coat coated with blood and one red eye looked directly at the face of Amgis. Amgis gave a loud scream, then ran into his room, took the blue orb, and waited patiently for the creature to show up. As soon as he saw it, he called forth the power of ice, and out of the air a stalagmite of ice seemed to engulf the creature. Except when it cleared, the creature was nowhere to be seen. The final words Amgis would say after that was two simple but true words, "I'm fucked."

     

    And well, he totally was.

     

    Norcelus was an utter and complete mess, as countless men had their blood and excrements stained on the battlefield in different sorts of body positions. With all those men like that, they seemed there to stay, while a yellow haired half-demon girl could only look in disbelief at the terror in the area.... 

     

     

Comments (165)

  • Midnight_Desiresx3

    [Mwahahahahahaha. I'm the first comment on this. :D & lets just say. . your entry is alot better than mine. xD;;]

  • ClockworkBunny
    You rock!!

    Fear arrives! And what an entrance!

  • megumi_smph

    [[I know I thought it was dumb too..this wasn't in this vid but the parents actually said he had an over-active imagination. You need to watch your kid if he has something like that. It's so stupid. I'm pissed at the people who put Naruto on Toonami/Cartoon Network instead of Adult swim. You know how much they cuss and perverted jokes they have? They cut out so much blood and everything. I'm telling you..a lot of Americans like that are stupid..]]

  • megumi_smph

    [[yeah I've seen it on Toonami that's why I'm mad. I watched all the episodes up till now except the last couple of ones on youtube. But now I'm taking a little break from Naruto since my friend is fricking obssessed with it and that's all she talks about pretty much. So that's why I haven't seen the last 2 or 3 episodes on youtube in Shipuden. And at least the DVDs are an improvement..I guess.]]

  • AngelFeatherAeris
  • megumi_smph

    [[yeah it's ridiculous..the popularity went down for me anyway. in the vid they even called it "Naruto Sand Ninjas". wth? "Sand Ninjas" is not in the title people..they didn't even pronounce Naruto right. But what adult would, you know?]]

  • hikaru_uotashi

    [yes it was very interesting]

  • megumi_smph

    [[eh it can't be helped..if those losers want to put it on Toonami let them and see what happens to another kid like this one. >.>]]

  • megumi_smph

    [[No I just can't go online a lot during the week, that's all. No one's on really when I first come home from school so I just write everyone back and then sign off because my parents don't like us using their computer. So sorry about that ^^;;]]

  • megumi_smph

    [[my little sis, and my step-sis. my little sister is 11 and my step-sister is 16.it's a pain since i have to share a room with my step-sis..]]

  • megumi_smph

    [[i'm used to it but that doesn't mean i don't want her to leave. XD i had to do it numerous times before with my little sister when my mom and dad were argueing and getting a divorce. my mom would always sleep in my room and she told me to sleep with jamie(that's her name) some nights. but then again that's not really sharing a room unless you mean at night.]]

  • megumi_smph

    [[that stinks..i don't like it. i can't wait till she moves out when she's 18. she has a job already and is saving up so hopefully she'll have enough money to move out by the time she graduates. i'm talking about my step-sis now, Ariel.]]

  • megumi_smph

    [[you don't have to buy them you can read them online. just go to google and type in tsubasa manga. then when the results come up, it should be the first one and it will bring you to the tsubasa msn page.]]

  • megumi_smph

    [[XD no i know. i collected the series at barnes&noble before i knew you could read it online. but then at the end of volume 10 i was like, ok i'm reading it online now. but i already had the books so i'm not going to abandon them and stop collecting them. i love my manga too much to just to stop buying it! x3 i just bought volume 16 when it came out a month ago. i'm anxiously waiting for the 17th one to add it to my collection!>.<]]

  • Midnight_Desiresx3

    [Yeah, I like your story. :D lol. It is longer though. But I dont like to make mine too long. x3 I make mine like medium length. I make them a few paragraphs, but yet I dont make them a novel. xDD lolll. how are you?]

  • megumi_smph

    [[sorry i took so long to write back. i was writing my new chapter and adding/editing photos for it.]]

    [[wow really? see..i told you it was as popular as Naruto! XD]]

  • Midnight_Desiresx3

    [I'm good as well. Just a tad bit chilly at the moment. :D Ohio is always so fxcking cold. lol ]

  • shizu_elk
  • shizu_elk

    lol i had to go back a chunk of weblog entries to read chapter one, you have an interesting story here you seem like the kind of person that can write an anime novel! seriously!

  • mcdaniel37

    Wow. Now I need to go back and read the first seven chapters...

  • megumi_smph

    [[okay just letting you know! x3 and the manga beats the anime by a long shot. besides, the manga's farther anyway. have you read any of it online yet? o.o]]

  • megumi_smph

    [[no i meant have you read the tsubasa manga yet, not naruto. i haven't read the last two chapters of that. o.o that reminds me..i gotz to read them! XD
    lol yeah i guess you can say that. and thanks for reading! >.< i liked your chapter 8 too, nice job! -gives you a thumbs up- phew..i feel so exhausted from writing all of that..i can't believe i wrote that much! o_o]]

  • megumi_smph

    [[no i know but i mean online, have you read chapters 2 and the others yet?]]

  • megumi_smph

    [[oh okies! x3 i just hope you like it..well...if you are willing to read the rest of the chapters then i guess you do like it! XD]]

  • megumi_smph

    [[o.o i'm on spring break. i have next week off.]]

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