Saturday, 27 December 2008
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Chapter 6 Fayre
The kid with yellow/brownish hair, bright red armor at his chest and his legs, already seemed to know his expected fate.
"Groan....this is going to end badly...I can feel it...Damn...stupid negative thoughts!!! Grr..........NOOOOO.....sigh I failed again....man I hate math..."
"Dude, what'd you expect? This math test was extremely hard. No one was going to pass it!"
"Wait, did you hear what I-" The soldiers nodded with a smirk on his face." .....Damn I hate talking out loud like that...." A few minutes later, the kid then looked over his other test scores that were given out, and while he didn't talk out loud, he said silently, "English: A+, History: A+, Combat Skills: A+, Math: D-......"
“Beating yourself over failing math again, Fayre?" Yelled a black haired soldier with the same set of armor the kid, Fayre, has on.
"No Adrian, I am not beating myself for the 20003022something time over failing math!!!" Secretly he was beating himself up because he stormed towards the water fountain to get a drink of water. But that's Fayre for you: just trying to do better at everything. As an 11 year old kid, Fayre wasn't exactly in a rich household: In fact his parents spent most of their time with multiple jobs to do, so they never had anytime with him. But because of that, Fayre felt like it was an obligation to do something that would please his parents, or get them to actually remember that he was there. He did something radical: he enlisted to join the Syrian Knights. It was a dream to him to actually work there, but he never thought he would do it, but with them asking for soldiers to join, he might as well give it a shot. His parents didn't seem to care as they felt it would be one less thing to worry about as they tried to raise enough money to live. Anyways, he passed the joining test and for three years he was under the tutelage of one of Syria's Four Wings, Commander Thomas, a feared knight who's been in countless battles over his time and worked his way up to glory. After those three years Fayre had the respect of those around him as an hard working young man who possessed talents beyond what any capable kid his age could do, was a smart young man who knew every thing there is to know, and had a combat skill that was strange, but diverse: he could use any weapon in battle, but he could also learn magic, something that only mages were supposed to do. He was a jack of all trades basically. Anyways, now that he's passed all the tests, his big opportunity has come: the war against Kenion is about to begin, and he was going to join it. He hopes that he gets to learn how war works when its real, not from, "Some silly book, " and hopes he can find some one to train under, now that Syrian Knight training is over. "But I have to survive this war to accomplish the goal."
Chapter 6X Sorentine
"Sir! We have received word from Thgil: they will support our endeavors in this war!"
"...Good...." was the only thing I could say in this situation to one of my messengers. Sigh...I can't believe this but I'm going to be fighting against a friend I knew from childhood. Did I do something to cause this rift? No, but I know one thing: Only my friend knows why this is happening, but in order to find that out, I must see him at all costs....
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nice drawings for before ~ x)
hahaha
[[pretty interesting. i like it. and do you mean mine? thanks!^-^ but it's already started. this is the third episode.]]
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nice. I like the pic too. Do you like mine? I have none about my person, but I'll do something someday...mabey when no ones on...
I'm just going to give u my solid opinion. I think you have a good idea as to what direction you should take the plot. BUT, the whole idea of placing it in school/highschool seems a little cliche. Plots like this become trite after the first thousand series... Same with the whole ' light vs dark' you can't find a more classic base, and your overall story needs to be phenominal to effectively pull it off. We've all heard the story of the amazing hero who was so powerful that he could defeat any enemy but somehow gets held up in a battle of ethics and morals. To sum up, it think you're heading in a good direction, but try to steer the story in a more creative fashion. :) good job, and as your writing skills progress i'm sure you're story will make a great read.
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((I see ._.))
Actually, I don't think there's anything wrong with the high school setting. Sure, it's been done before, but what hasn't? It's just up to the writer to make it original. I like it. It lightens up the story, giving us a sense of normalcy in the middle of all the evil and battling and other heavy subjects. It gives us balance.
Do you think maybe Fayre isn't a mage at all? I mean, if you write chapter after chapter and magic NEVER comes up... maybe he's trying to tell you something. I've had to change characters before. I kind of have to give them a certain amount of free reign. I'm not telling you what to do- if you can find a place to squeeze in magic, cool. I'm just saying.
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thankies, but what made you think I don't like to draw? Drawing's like, my favorite thing to do!
um...I can draw someone right now, but I don't know how you'd be able to see it. I don't have a scanner or a camera so I have a problem there. Why? You don't belive I drew them?
it's ok
nope! sorry. unless you'd like to go back to a wblog entery I made like, a year ago and see some old, mager sucky picuters. I'll keep trying to get some on
lol I will. And it's awsome!!!But I haven't been able to play it lately because my wii is being an ass
idk. I heard that happens alot and I can send it in to get fixed for free. I'm just to lazy to get the info for it
Naw. I think I just need to keep trying it.
it's not a secret. I just don't know what it is.
yeah. it starts to load, then it says, "A error has occured. please press the eject button and turn off the wii"It's realy weird
I don't know what the friggiddily problem is!!!
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